Monday, January 27, 2014

Prewriting and Ideas for Personal Essay

In my first post, titled "Food and Me," I explored my relationship with food in great depth. However, I want to take this personal essay even deeper.

I want to talk about some of my painful experiences with food - not just the positive ones like I talked about before. Food typically makes me feel good, but that isn't always the case. That's especially true when I think about some upsetting moments in my past that involve food.

I mentioned before, and it's clear to see if you look at me, that I'm overweight. That reality in itself is painful and I associate it with food because food is the reason I'm overweight (and my lack of motivation to exercise).

Growing up in a low income household, food had a different meaning for me than it may have for others. My family received food stamps for most of my life. My siblings and I received free and reduced lunch for almost all of our lives in public schools. These things played a major role in the way I thought and felt about food.

I'll keep this short, since this isn't the actual essay, but I find it hard to not continue to talk about these issues rightthisveryminute. These memories spark a lot of emotions and ideas for me, but I'll keep those to myself for now.

I'm interested to know if any of you share a perspective similar to mine. Have you ever had to rely on government assistance to get your food? How did/does it affect you?

4 comments:

  1. Your paper seems like it will be great! I really like your take on it because I am sure some people can relate to this very well while others it will be something new

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  2. I can definitely relate to your childhood. After my dad was laid off we were left in the same "low-income" status. The way I looked at food for a very long time was, "buy whatever's cheapest". It didn't bother me all the time, but I was embarrassed to be poor compared to my friends and peers

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  3. Matt, I can completely relate to that! I was embarrassed that I didn't have name brand foods and that I always had to get hot lunch, even if it looked disgusting, and I had to eat it or I'd go hungry. Kids notice this types of things and it really affected me growing up. I was fortunate enough that I wasn't often bullied for it, but I definitely felt different from my friends. Thanks Kelsey, that's what I'm hoping for! Thanks for the input guys.

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  4. I think these ideas and topics will make a really great paper.

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